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USER
I will give you a resume of 3.3 years old experienced developer and I want you to say whether the resume is good or bad. If bad what all points can be corrected and also give suggestions
XXXX XXXXXX
Mobile: +91-0000000000 Email:
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To be a part of the core team of organization where I get ample opportunity to explore my talent in order to fruitful or to contribute in the productive manner.
PROFESSIONAL SYNOPSIS
• Having 3.3 years of experience in Data warehousing using SAP BO tool as Report Developer.
• Experience in gathering of the User Requirements, and involved in preparing the documents like detailed Functional Design documents and Report Design Details documents for the reports.
• Self starter with good understanding and goal oriented approach to Problem solving issues and extremely detail Oriented
• Excellent Analytical Skills, Oral, Communication skills, Interpersonal skills and documentation skills.
• Experience in working flexible schedule to accommodate project deadlines and ability prioritize work load to get things done before deadlines
• Involved in Writing the Universe Document, Report Layout Document.
• Good knowledge in SQL and Basics in Teradata.
• Involved in knowledge sharing and knowledge transfer to the new members of the project & Preparation of knowledge transfer documents.
• Excellent problem solving skills with a strong technical background and result oriented team player with excellent communication and interpersonal skills.
SKILL SET
Technical:
Reporting Tool : SAP BO 4.0, Web intelligence
ETL Tool : Informatica Power Center 9.1/8.6
Databases : Oracle 10g/11g, Teradata 13.4
Database Tools : Teradata SQL assistant
Operating Systems : Windows XP, UNIX
Functional:
Product development and testing activities.
Troubleshooting technical problems; conducting various tests & inspections to ensure that project developed are in compliance with pre-set technical specifications.
ORGANISATIONAL EXPERIENCE
In Capgemini India as “Consultant” from March 2013 to till now
Project 1:
Client : xxxxxxxxxxxx
Role : SAP BO Developer
Project : xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Duration : MARCH -2013 to MAY 2014
Description:
The objective of this pre-study is to assist XXXXXX in achieving its vision of world-class service, by analyzing the impact of the change to its original system and ensuring that TSIC requirements are fulfilled within the new DWH environment. This pre-study will act as an input to the delivery engagement that intends to develop cutting-edge reporting and analysis infrastructure. , Telia Sonera plans to revise its existing CRM system by incorporating SalesForce.com (SFDC) into their system. Telia Sonera is implementing Enterprise Data Warehouse using Teradata technology, which will act as the target data store for SFDC system.
Responsibilities:
• Gathered the User Requirements and also updated the existing documents, and prepared the documents like detailed Functional Design Documents and Report design details documents for the reports.
• Analyzing the requirements and involved in preparing Technical approach document for Universe.
• Developing Universe as per the requirements.
• Working with joins, loops, aliases and Hierarchies.
• Working with context.
• Create predefined conditions using Business Objects.
• Understanding the report requirements and development of reports accordingly.
• Creating drill and Master Detail reports in Web Intelligence
• Developed one-to-one mappings using Informatica Power center.
• Understanding the Technical Specifications Documents and providing KT.
Technical Environment: SAP BO 4.0, Web Intelligence Rich Client, Informatica Power Center 9.1
Project 2:
Client : XXXXXXX
Role : SAP BO Developer
Project : XXXX
Duration : MAY-2014 to till date
Description:
The objective of this pre-study is to assist XXXX XXXXin achieving its vision of world-class service, by analyzing the impact of the change to its original system and Ensuring that VQMS will have the all data at a one place and in single system. This project will handle with all the call details and bills of the Telia Sonera company around the whole Europe. This is a interconnect Business which is handled by TSIC and we are getting the source data from 3 source system and loading as per business requirement in DB and generating the reports.
Responsibilities:
• Gathered the User Requirements and also updated the existing documents, and prepared the documents like detailed Functional Design Documents and Report design details documents for the reports.
• Analyzing the requirements and involved in preparing Technical approach document for Universe.
• Developing Universe as per the requirements.
• Working with joins, loops, aliases and Hierarchies.
• Working with context.
• Create predefined conditions using Business Objects.
• Understanding the report requirements and development of reports accordingly.
• Creating drill and Master Detail reports in Web Intelligence
Environment : SAP BO 4.0, Web Intelligence Rich Client
ASSISTANT
### Evaluation of the Resume The resume presents a developer with 3.3 years of experience in data warehousing using SAP BO, but overall, it has several areas that need improvement. Here's a breakdown of the strengths and weaknesses, along with suggestions for improvement. #### Strengths: 1. **Experience**: Relevant work experience in SAP BO and data warehousing is clearly stated. 2. **Technical Skills**: Lists a decent range of technical skills, including tools and platforms used. 3. **Project Details**: Provides specific examples of projects worked on, showing application of skills. 4. **Professional Summary**: Presents a professional goal, indicating a desire for growth. #### Weaknesses: 1. **Clarity and Conciseness**: The resume is quite verbose. Some statements could be shortened and made clearer. 2. **Objective Statement**: The objective is vague. It does not specify what role or type of contribution the candidate seeks. 3. **Formatting**: The formatting is inconsistent, particularly with bullet points and sections. It lacks a clear structure, making it hard to navigate. 4. **Repetition**: The responsibilities listed under both projects are very similar, leading to redundancy. 5. **Grammar and Typos**: There are grammatical errors and awkward phrases (e.g., "to fruitful or to contribute in the productive manner,” "involved in preparing the documents like"). 6. **Quantifiable Achievements**: Lacks quantifiable metrics or accomplishments that demonstrate the impact of work. 7. **Skillset Section**: The skill set could be expanded and formatted for better readability. For example, separate tools from languages and clarify proficiency levels. 8. **No Education Details**: Educational background is missing, which is critical information for a resume. ### Suggestions for Improvement: 1. **Objective Statement**: Revise the objective to be more specific about the type of role you are seeking. E.g., "Seeking a challenging role in data warehousing to leverage 3.3 years of experience as a SAP BO Developer in a dynamic tech environment." 2. **Formatting**: Use a cleaner and consistent format throughout the resume. Consider using clear headings (e.g., Professional Summary, Skills, Experience, Education). 3. **Professional Summary**: Make the professional synopsis more concise, focusing on the core qualifications and areas of expertise rather than general statements. 4. **Eliminate Redundancy**: In your project descriptions, combine similar responsibilities and highlight any differences to emphasize unique contributions. 5. **Grammar Check**: Carefully proofread for grammatical and spelling errors. A polished resume reflects professionalism. 6. **Quantify Achievements**: Add metrics to highlight the impact of your work. For example, “Increased report generation efficiency by 30%” or “Successfully delivered 5 major BI reports to stakeholders, improving decision-making.” 7. **Expanded Skillset**: Organize your technical skills more effectively by grouping them into categories (e.g., Reporting Tools, ETL Tools, Databases). Consider adding your proficiency level (e.g., Beginner, Intermediate, Expert). 8. **Add Education**: Include details about your education qualifications. Mention the degree attained, institution name, and graduation year. 9. **Exclude Irrelevant Information**: Remove any vague or unnecessary details that do not add value to your application or illustrate your competencies. 10. **Contact Information**: Ensure the contact information section is complete. As it stands, the email is missing. Present it formally to appear professional. By making these changes, the candidate can significantly improve the quality of their resume, which should increase their chances of landing interviews.